MANUSCRIPT CRITIQUES

Working with Jasminne was a breath of fresh air. She gave terrific constructive feedback, direction, and clear notes on my manuscript, which, as a new writer, was hugely helpful.
— Patricia Gonzalez, Latinx in Publishing Mentee

WHAT I focus on:

Concept & Big Idea, Plot & Pacing, Tension & Stakes, Character Development, Voice, Language & Syntax, Literary Devices, Structure, Formatting & Organization, Themes & Motifs, Strengths & Pain Points, Picture Book page turns & pagination, Some line edits, Some mechanics & grammar*

Other craft & structure elements as desired/discussed.

*I do not offer copy editing exclusively!

what you can get:

10 min FREE Initial Consultation

30-60 min goal setting session

In-line comments & manuscript feedback

Editorial letter

30-60 min follow-up session


* Please note, using my services is not a guarantee that your work work will result in an offer of representation and/or publication nor does it mean that my name can be used as a referral. Thank you.